Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Rhetorical Presic Of other Bloggers

Aj West in her blog "Poetry Articles and Completed Works", writes
poems about life issues from what seems to be a woman's point of view;
She writes about adolescence, adultery, love, marriage, motherhood,
relationships, sex, substance abuse , old age, wisdom, etc in a
creative and some might say art insightful way. I chose this blog
because I enjoy poetry, I felt like I could relate to her blog because
poetry is my most inner thoughts that I decided to type or write, I
don't really share it with the public, but its something we have in
common; only thing that set me and her apart is that we she is a
seasoned writer and she makes a living off of her work. I think she's
happy with her occupation because she published mostly all of her work,
just to see that people enjoy her writing maybe good enough for her.
Although some of her poems to me are hard to understand I liked them,
she really can call her work art.

Amy,in her blog As a Star, describes her life as a married college
student and a young mother, so far she just talked about what she did
everyday or what made her angry or happy, I wouldn't say that her page
entertained me much because I felt that she didn't talk about her
thoughts on interesting topics she just talked about herself more than
anything. I mean dint get me wrong I would like to get to know her but
not really in the way she is displaying. The most intriguing part of
her blog is her about me section labeled Star; she basically described
me as in her interest, it just seemed funny how we liked to do some of
the same things. Her page was nice in a sense of coloring it could have
been more eye catching but
it was nice.

Gretchen Cawthon, in her blog "Girls Cant What?" created a blog to
somewhat change the stereotype that women can't do certain things just
because they are women. Gretchen stated that her page is for women who
are pursuing their dreams in fields that are normally dominated by
men;in her blog women come up with a series of things that were brought
to their attention of what a woman cant do. So she came up with product
that spread her ideas around so that she can inspire women that they
can do anything, she mad t-shirt, pins, mugs, hat etc anything that she
could think of.She was inspired by all the times people told her that
she couldn't do something, for example she go into a car crash and the
doctor told her she would never walk again she was determined to prove
him and everyone else who believed him wrong, that is why she invented
this blog so that young girls could feel that they can do anything with
determination.

2 comments:

  1. I really liked Aishas blog because of how inviting it is. She definantly puts her view of things out there but its in a nice way. She is also very descriptive and I would know because we read the same blog by A.J. West. I really like the flow of things and cant wait to read more.

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  2. What I come to understand is that Aisha really likes poetry, and this helps her out when she tries to understand other peoples blogs. I think you should use poetry in some of your future blogs to help you get you point out. Even if Aisha doesn't like her have interest in other peoples blog she still tries to help them out in any way possible.

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